Writing Advice that I Just Don’t Get

This post is going to start off with some feeble excuses. Mainly, the excuse as to why it’s been a while since I’ve updated anything.

I don’t know if anyone else is having this problem, but I have difficulty writing both a work in progress and a blog post at the same time. This unfortunately means that when I have a lot to say on my blog, I don’t write a lot of what I want to write. And when I hit a good streak on a work in progress, the blog languishes (as it has been doing recently).

I’ve decided to gear up for Camp Nano in July, with a goal of writing about half a Nanowrimo novel – I’ve set my goal to 750 words per day. This handily works with the 750 words site and I won’t feel like I’m trying to kill myself. Also, I reserve a special place in my heart for Nanowrimo, and I feel that the particular kind of stress it brings should be a strictly November thing.

So, if you don’t see me during July, that’s why.

When writing we all come across a lot of advice. I think that enough people have ridiculed the ‘write what you know’ advice, so I thought I would spend a post discussing some of the newer advice on the circuit which haven’t particularly worked for me.

Before we begin, I’ll just note that writing is a personal thing, and what works for one person may not work for another. Others may find them amazing. I am, of course, open to all takes in the comments.


Ignore Your Inner Editor: I started getting this one a lot when I joined Nanowrimo. It was on their list of advice for writers and is clearly intended to help you keep moving. It’s a terrible thing to be completely paralyzed when you know you have to write 5,000 more words to get back up to your goal.

One day in November 2011 I was at a write in and sitting next to my municipal liaison. I was studying my prose, decided I could re-word a sentence, and moved to chop it out. My ML caught me in the act and spent the next 15 minutes lecturing me on how I needed to quash that inner editor and just go, go, go.

This advice is getting popular, it would seem. But it really, really doesn’t work for me. I have strong feelings of self-doubt and I like to edit as I go, even though it means I can spend hours staring at one sentence. It means that the novel is just a little bit better if I go through for edits and rewrites. And all those little bits really add up, and make it so that maybe I don’t hate my writing with a fiery passion and confine it to the dusty spaces of my spare hard drive.

Sometimes I do acknowledge that I’ll just have to fix a problem later, and I usually do that with Nanowrimo novels because of the time and word constraints. But that may be connected to the fact that I have never revisited a Nano-novel. To think that I might have written that s***…

Kill Your Darlings: This could mean a number of things, but most people seem to take the advice as, ‘kill your characters, don’t be squeamish.’ So that’s what I’m going to focus on.

A week or so ago, I read a blog post on George R.R. Martin and the mixed success his last two books have had, especially compared to the smash hits of the first three. One comment that came up again and again was that readers didn’t particularly care any more. Not to spoil too much, but George R.R. Martin likes killing off his characters. A lot. Often there’s a shock factor involved.

Two things have happened to his series: first, the characters we care about are all dying, so we don’t care anymore; second, the deaths are no longer a big shock.

It’s great to have a big twist in the story. It’s great to be willing to sacrifice something you love for the good of the tale. But maybe this advice should be followed by, ‘Don’t turn a writing feature into a gimmick.’

Never Give Up: This is a hard piece of advice because it’s the kind of advice we all want. It makes us feel like we could and should keep striving for success with our work. And yes, we should persevere. Just because we have a setback or two doesn’t mean we should abandon everything. But I’m going to delve into anecdote time again to show why I don’t agree wholeheartedly with this advice.

I wrote three novels between my 16th and 17th summer. One of them was a Nanowrimo novel, one I wrote in three months, one in six. I took a different approach to planning each of them, which I will spare detailing here.

One of the things they all had in common was that they were terrible.

No big surprise there. I believe that I wrote well, for a teen, but that didn’t make me a publishable author. And when I look back on those novels, I do love them in their own way. But I would never, ever try to edit and publish them under any circumstances. I like to think of them as practice, like Nanowrimo each year. They helped me develop the skills and and determination to write a longer piece of work, and they helped me learn what I was good at and what I was bad at.

For a while, I tried to edit one of them for publication. But there came a time when I had to face facts: it simply wasn’t publishable. It would be easier to rewrite it with a different plot and an altered cast of characters, more suited to the ideas I actually have in my head now.

This still happens to me. Recently I had to stop a work in progress and start a large part over from scratch, just because books and movies at the time were coming out with the exact same concept. Though I had conceived of it independently, I had to scrap the thing and start over because no one would care whether I’d thought of it ‘first’ or not. It would be derivative anyway. And while it can be depressing to look at a monster of a work and realize its days are done, surely that’s better than bitterly slaving away for years that will end up in the editor’s trash pile, or at the bottom of the amazon kindle list.

That’s all for now. If you’ve got extra pieces of writerly advice that don’t quite work for you, or if you have a good reason to trust more wholeheartedly in the advice above, do let me know.

8 thoughts on “Writing Advice that I Just Don’t Get

  1. MishaBurnett says:

    First, “Ignore you inner editor” makes sense for one style of writing–people who write in a series of drafts, getting down a story and then rewriting and polishing it.

    I don’t do don’t that. I write and rewrite and edit in my head, and then type it out when it’s done. My inner editor is the same as my inner writer–it’s all part of my process.

    Second “Kill your darlings” doesn’t refer to characters, it refers to scenes and descriptions. What Steven King was saying is that many times the parts that we are proudest of as writers is what has to be cut because it slows the pace of the story or distracts the reader from the action.

    Again, that makes sense for plot driven action novels, but what King would call my darlings is the strength of my prose. I am a stylist, I don’t write to get from point A to point B, I write to enjoy the ride. So that one doesn’t really work for me, either.

    • forgingshadows says:

      Thanks for your comment. Like I said, ignoring your inner editor can be necessary for some and I understand why some people like to follow it. But I’m glad that other people than me don’t like to do it. And thanks for clearing up the Stephen King thing. I’ll probably edit the post later. I’ve heard it misappropriated a little too often, I guess, and I haven’t yet read the source material.

  2. This rings incredibly true with me. You’ve made some very honest insights that writers need to admit sometimes. I’ve tried the no editing thing and it works to an extent. I find that I can’t keep going if I don’t fix something that doesn’t flow. It’s like building a wall. If the foundations are sloppy, I don’t even want to keep working on it, let alone finish building a terrible wall and coming back to straighten it up. I think all writing advice should always be taken with caution. They usually make sense, yes, but they shouldn’t be treated as absolute rules. That takes all the fun out of writing in the first place!

    Thanks for sharing!

    • forgingshadows says:

      Thank you for your comment! I think that is a perfect analogy for ignoring the editor – for me, at least. I know that others out there swear by it.

      Thanks for stopping by!

  3. Love, love, love this post. So many great insights here, thanx for sharing. Def agree with the novel/blog thing – it seems impossible to do both well. And also with the editing – if I didn’t do a quick edit as I went, I think I’d be re-writing the whole thing from scratch. I have also ditched a manuscript, because I just don’t have the craft yet to do the story justice – glad I got on with a better story and didn’t waste time trying to ‘save’ it. Was it Hemmingway who said to take your first 500,000 words and burn them?

    • forgingshadows says:

      Thank you for your comment. That’s some harsh advice from Hemmingway, but I wouldn’t be surprised with that guy.

  4. excellent post, don’t panic, you’re not alone! I have the same trouble with writing my fantasy and now writing my blog (poetry, comedy and fantasy fiction stuff). When I work on one, the other suffers, I have yet to find that happy medium but will be sure to let you know if and when I do (and would appreciate the heads up if you discover it first!). Don’t trash anything, always shelve it for another time. every writer comes up against the sense of other books and films having the same concepts as them, don’t worry or beat yourself up over it (it happens all the time!). there is no worries over sharing a concept, otherwise there would only have been one story ever written and we’d be playing computer games (well, ONE computer game). It is hard and sometimes upsetting when you write something that pleases you and then read or watch something that has done the exact same thing, i can relate to that (many can). One famous fantasy writer suggested the writer stop reading to stop getting upset or influenced, I love his books (LOVE them) but that is a rediculous notion, why or how would we write if we are not influenced/inspired by others. So long as you are not copying word for word, don’t worry so much about it, you’ll be fine. Keep smiling and keep writing, kind regards from Baldy 🙂

    • forgingshadows says:

      Thank you for your comment! Inspiring words to keep me going. Admittedly, I just threw out that draft and started from a different approach. It wasn’t too bad, since the first draft wasn’t too long yet, and with a rethinking and retooling I have actually written more and had more drive. And I never throw anything out, I’m a work hoarder! Sometimes that comes back to bite me when I take a look at my old work and shake my head at former me. But at least that means I’ve improved.

      Again, thanks for your comment. Good sentiments and optimism all around.

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