Today I wrote, “The streets were dark and without light.”
Yes, that was an actual sentence in my actual Nanowrimo novel.
Fortunately, the inner editor kicked in and I removed it before continuing. Even though we’re not supposed to hit the backspace key, EVER (I remember someone saying that we should tape it over), I will never be sorry that I failed to hit it then. What a sentence. Eesh.
As I rather casually read over what I had written during the course of the evening, I noticed that I used the word dark a lot. I am describing an evening scene in which my main character returns to her hometown. And even though night is falling, do I really have to use dark as many times as I do?
I guess that’s the lesson for Day number four. I need to broaden my vocabulary.
I never thought I had a particularly small vocabulary. I know a lot of synonyms and almost-synonyms, and a lot of words that are long and complicated and impossible to spell. But the problem is that I don’t necessarily use them.
When it comes to writing, I believe that the right word should be used. Not the most complicated word, not the least complicated word. The right word. I want to use the right words in my writing, and I’m pretty sure that of the ten or so darks that I use in my 400 word paragraph, I could find at least eight other ‘right’ words.
I know that’s not the point right now. The point is to get all those words down and fix it up later. But I couldn’t help noticing it, and wishing that I could think of something better at the time.
Mood: pretty positive – I’m still above the daily word count goal!
Word Count: 6,765
Music: Slow, Love Slow by Nightwish (the instrumental version)